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Poor grammar, unwieldy sentences, and jargon obscure your message.
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I’m great at editing. I’m also ruthless – because content is stronger when it’s clear and correct and easy to read. And that’s the whole point of grammar and style: clarity.
If your reader must clamber over mountains of jargon that might sound meaningful but don’t actually impart meaning, you’ve taken a wrong turn. You need an editor.
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